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Part One: Revision Artifact
- Sicily Marie
- Apr 6, 2022
- 1 min read
Original sentence: When I went and looked through the peephole, all I saw was a stream of red pouring down her face.
When I went and glanced through the peephole, all I observed was a surge of red pouring down her face.
Changed stream to surge
Saw- observed
Looked- glanced
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